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Post by La Voleur et La Druide on Jun 16, 2005 15:30:51 GMT -5
[glow=green,1,300]"Something's Wrong" ~Serenity Beausejour~June 16, 2005
"Standing here, In your arms, This can't be right, Something's wrong.
Can't pull away, From your touch, Engulfed in my, Very own lust.
How do I explain this? Is there something here, Something that's possibly real? I don't know.
I know I can't go on, Feeling this complete confusion, What am I to say, Other than 'Later'?
How do I talk about something, I don't understand? How do we work this out, This unexpected plan?
What am I to do, My thoughts are all mixed, Jumbled between you.
What am I to say? What am I to do? What am I to think? What am I to do?
Am I to cry out, Not of sadness, But from my own frustrations? Or am I to do else?
Send me a sign, Send me a hint, Send me something, As I'm falling down. Send me something, Before I hit the ground.
This can't be right, There's something wrong, When you know what it is, This'll all be gone.
Clouds are seeping, Away from the air, Sleep's departing, But I'm not sleeping." [/glow]
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Post by Silver Wings on Jun 16, 2005 15:34:41 GMT -5
*Confused* Okay, I like but I am confused.
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Post by La Voleur et La Druide on Jun 17, 2005 15:31:09 GMT -5
S'ok sweetie, it'll make most confused, I jus' really wanted to write. Anyways, ttyl. ^-^ Luff, Yer Renity~
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Post by Ilcario on Jun 24, 2005 17:33:34 GMT -5
*stuffy british accent*Well my dear, there's hardly /any/ true rythym or ryhme scheme, so it /can't/ be good poetry. *sniff*
Well /I/ think its wonderful Re, don't listen to that other guy...
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Post by La Voleur et La Druide on Jun 24, 2005 22:54:50 GMT -5
Rotfl, well then, thank you very much Patrick, tell yer friend it's free-verse, doesn't need to rhyme or have rhythm. Lol. If you think hard enough, 'tis about a situation you know about, no need to annouce what that situation is though, heh.
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